*Ouch*! After reading it several times, I CAN see how it would would vice versa! Very interesting dialogue to make that happen!
That response isn't encouraging!
i agree, not a great response, and well done with such few words!!
I love the structure -- the way that the "she said" appears on the previous line so that the whole thing can be reversed more effectively. "said she".
I was actually going to call it 'He said, she said' but then I realised I already had a poem by that title! Thanks for all the kind feedback. I'm busy with final assessments for uni this weekend and have largely missed out on everyone else's writing :(
Not waht he was looking for, I imagine. Very well written. I agree with Jester -- you positioning of 'she said' is clever. Thanks for linking up.
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