Thursday, May 10, 2012

Stranger In My Sights

I wouldn't have believed her, but for that forlorn sigh. It tore at my heart. I knew something must have gone terribly, terribly wrong. I wanted to comfort her, but I didn't know how. I didn't even know if she wanted comforting.

As if she'd read my thoughts, she straightened up in her chair and her face became a mask once more. It struck me that I knew almost nothing about this woman who sat across the table from me. She was, and always would be, an enigma. And suddenly, that tiny distance between us grew to a yawning divide.

I yawned. It seemed such an inappropriate response, given the circumstances. I hurried to cover my face, scolding myself for reacting to the word association.

Callie grinned. 'Same old Sue.'

I tested the water again; this time it went down smoothly. 'So, what happened? Was it an accident?'

'No... more like an incident.' She spoke nonchalantly, then hurriedly added, 'A regrettable one.'

My mind whirred, trying to make sense of what she was saying. I had no reason to doubt her, but I needed more information. 'Callie, please, tell me.'

She looked me dead in the eye and said, in a cool voice, 'I can't. I'm sure you understand.'

Then she called for the bill.

Have you read Part 1: Café-In-Confidence?


Annabelle said...

Oh! So curious, and both we and she are denied! Callie's very self-possessed -- I'll be interested in finding out why if there's more.

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Anonymous said...

reading this alone, it reminds of how i behave at times around those i believe to be my best confidants, always zip-tied and locked.
reading the first part, it made the beginnings for a very interesting tale. it makes me curious to know the circumstance of it all; however, an ending that's a cliff-hanger leaves the imagination to wonder

p.s. thank you for the comment on my piece, i'm enjoying having my own blog (:

Jester Queen said...

"And suddenly, that tiny distance between us grew to a yawning divide."

That sentence right there sets up the two characters and the space they will never bridge. Yes, it seems Sue does understand.

Anonymous said...

Must be one heck of a secret. Makes me want to know even more :)

Jennifer Worrell said...

Love a good secret! Well done!

Libby said...

This was well-written and makes me wonder WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED?!?

Trifecta said...

What happened? I want to know! You build this up really well and as you can see from the comments, we're all curious. Nice job. Thanks for linking up.

Tim Miller said...

i want part three - now!